Hollyleaf's Demise Humanized

EDIT: I have been informed that Hollyleaf is actually still with us and returns to play a role in the story. Well, isn't that just dandy....

I'D LIKE SOME FEEDBACK. Thanks.


I kept messing up in Paintbrush and I have to delete everything and start over a few times, but the final looks pretty good.

It's Hollyleaf's lame suicidal demise, but humanized. I'm kind of glad she's dead, since she was so lame compared to her brothers. And it may seem weird that the shine on her hair is green, but with a name like the one she has, I thought it would make sense.
Art and human design (C) Me.
Hollyleaf and her death scene (C) Erin Hunter.